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Let’s create something creative… a never ending story. So how does it work? I’ll write the first sentence and it’s your turn to think about the next part of it. You simply copy my beginning and add your sentence to it.

Here we go:


Once upon a time there was an old guy walking along the beach, not paying attention to what was happening around him.

Once upon a time there was an old guy walking along the beach, not paying attention to what was happening around him. Not even to the sun setting in the ocean or the seagulls soaring in the orange sunset sky. He couldn't think of anything else but what had happened that day... It was early in the morning at this special day when he got this one call.

Once upon a time there was an old guy walking along the beach, not paying attention to what was happening around him. Not even to the sun setting in the ocean or the seagulls soaring in the orange sunset sky. He couldn't think of anything else but what had happened that day... It was early in the morning at this special day when he got this one call. A phone call that had changed his life as he knew it. He would have to leave, he didn't know where, when or how, but he had to go! Right now! His son called him full of excitement and told him to pack all his belongings and be ready to flee.

Once upon a time there was an old guy walking along the beach, not paying attention to what was happening around him. Not even to the sun setting in the ocean or the seagulls soaring in the orange sunset sky. He couldn't think of anything else but what had happened that day... It was early in the morning at this special day when he got this one call. A phone call that had changed his life as he knew it. He would have to leave, he didn't know where, when or how, but he had to go! Right now! His son called him full of excitement and told him to pack all his belongings and be ready to flee.
And that was what the man would do, flee to an unknown destination. Only having one bag to take his precious belongings with him. He was sneaking through villages, slept rough and regretted that he had forgotten to take his umbrella with him, because the raining season is about to start.

Once upon a time there was an old guy walking along the beach, not paying attention to what was happening around him. Not even to the sun setting in the ocean or the seagulls soaring in the orange sunset sky. He couldn't think of anything else but what had happened that day... It was early in the morning at this special day when he got this one call. A phone call that had changed his life as he knew it. He would have to leave, he didn't know where, when or how, but he had to go! Right now! His son called him full of excitement, and told him to pack all his belongings and be ready to flee.

And that was what the man would do, flee to an unknown destination. Only having one bag to take his precious belongings with him. He was sneaking through villages, slept rough and regretted that he had forgotten to take his umbrella with him, because the raining season is about to start. After a few nights out in the wild he really longed for a long warm shower and a real bed to sleep on!

While he was sleeping, he heard a kind of mysterious sound. The ceiling started creaking softly. He tried to sleep again.. but the sound wouldn't go away. "why?" he wondered!! He couldn't come to a conclusion because suddenly the roof flew away and he was simply taken aback. In his fear he stampeded out of the house.

Once upon a time there was an old guy walking along the beach, not paying attention to what was happening around him. Not even to the sun setting in the ocean or the seagulls soaring in the orange sunset sky. He couldn't think of anything else but what had happened that day... It was early in the morning at this special day when he got this one call. A phone call that had changed his life as he knew it. He would have to leave, he didn't know where, when or how, but he had to go! Right now! His son called him full of excitement, and told him to pack all his belongings and be ready to flee.

And that was what the man would do, flee to an unknown destination. Only having one bag to take his precious belongings with him. He was sneaking through villages, slept rough and regretted that he had forgotten to take his umbrella with him, because the raining season is about to start. After a few nights out in the wild he really longed for a long warm shower and a real bed to sleep on!

While he was sleeping, he heard a kind of mysterious sound. The ceiling started creaking softly. He tried to sleep again.. but the sound wouldn't go away. "why?" he wondered!! He couldn't come to a conclusion because suddenly the roof flew away and he was simply taken aback. In his fear he stampeded out of the house. The roof was nowhere to be seen... in agony he started roaming about the country. After a while he came to the conclusion that he had to move on and decided to buy a campervan to travel around the world.